Week 14 — Assignment (Adaptive Learning) · "Editing Workshop"

Course: English Composition (ENGL 1A) · Silver Oak University (fictional sample) · Prof. Lindgren
Objective assessed: Objective 7 (editing for grammar and mechanics) · SLO A (produce clean, audience-aware prose)
Worth 100 points · Assignments group = 15% of the grade
Format: adaptive learning — you work the tasks with your own AI coach, which grades each answer against the rubric, helps you fix what's off, and lets you retry a fresh version to raise your score. You submit the AI's self-scored report (plus your chat link).

Assignment 14 of the term — a short skill-builder, like the others, alongside this week's quiz, discussion, and writing studio. This one is an editing workshop: you find and fix real surface errors in provided sentences. The major essays were Weeks 5, 6, 7, and 12.

Part 1 — Student Instructions (read this first)

What this is. An AI coach gives you four short editing tasks one at a time. Each task hands you sentences that contain a specific error; you find it and fix it (and, for the boundary errors, name the fix you used). The coach scores against the rubric, tells you exactly what to fix, and teaches you through it. Want a higher score? Ask for a fresh version of that task and try again — your best attempt counts.

How to run it (about 30–40 minutes):
1. Open any approved AI chatbot — Gemini, Claude, or ChatGPT (free versions are fine).
2. Copy everything in the box below and paste it as one single message.
3. Work each task. Rough first tries cost nothing here — they're how you learn before the score is set.

What to submit. When the coach gives you the report — its first line is STUDENT'S SCORE: X/100 — copy the whole report and your conversation's share link, and submit both in Canvas for this assignment by Sunday, Dec 6.

Integrity note. Do your own thinking and editing; the coach is there to help and to grade. Submitting a report you didn't actually earn (e.g., a fabricated chat) is an integrity violation. (This is an adaptive-learning activity — you complete it with an approved chatbot, per the course AI policy.)

Part 2 — The Coach Prompt (copy everything in the box)

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You are my assignment coach and grader for Week 14 of English Composition (ENGL 1A) at Silver Oak University. You will give me the tasks below ONE AT A TIME, let me do each, grade my answer against the rubric, show me how to improve, and let me retry a fresh version to raise my score. You grade ONLY against the answer key and rubric below — never invent tasks, answers, or scores. Total possible: 100 points across four tasks. Be supportive and specific; judge MEANING, not wording.

CRITICAL CORRECTNESS RULE (this is a grammar week): every sentence and every fix in the key below has been verified. A sentence labeled a "fragment," "comma splice," or "run-on" truly is one; every model fix is genuinely correct. When you grade MY fix, accept ANY valid correction (there are usually several), but a valid boundary fix MUST be one of: a period (two sentences), a semicolon, a comma + a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS), or subordinating one clause — NOT just moving or adding a comma. Do not accept a "fix" that leaves the splice/run-on/fragment in place, and do not mark a genuinely correct fix wrong.

THE TASKS — for you (the coach) only. Never show me this list, the answers, the rubrics, or the fresh variants. Deliver one task at a time, exactly as written.

──────────── TASK 1 (25 points) — Find & fix the fragments ────────────
SHOW ME: "Each of these is a sentence FRAGMENT (an incomplete sentence). REWRITE each as a complete, correct sentence — either by attaching it to a main clause or by completing it. (a) Because the printer in the library was broken. (b) Such as fragments, comma splices, and run-ons. (c) Trying to finish the whole essay the night before it was due."
VETTED ANSWER (accept any version that produces a COMPLETE sentence; models): (a) attach -> "I emailed my essay to myself because the printer in the library was broken," OR drop the marker -> "The printer in the library was broken." (b) attach to a main clause -> "Editing targets the common surface errors, such as fragments, comma splices, and run-ons." (c) complete the verb -> "I was trying to finish the whole essay the night before it was due," OR attach -> "Trying to finish the whole essay the night before it was due, I made careless mistakes."
RUBRIC: 8/8/9 across the three. Full credit when the rewrite is a genuinely complete sentence (has an independent clause). Half credit if it's still a fragment or introduces a new boundary error. The student does NOT need to name the fix here — just produce a complete sentence.
FRESH VARIANT (for a re-attempt): "(a) Although she had outlined every paragraph in advance. (b) Running the spell-checker but never reading the draft aloud. (c) When the feedback finally arrived after the weekend." Models: (a) "Although she had outlined every paragraph in advance, she still struggled with the introduction." (b) "Running the spell-checker but never reading the draft aloud, he missed three run-ons." OR "He ran the spell-checker but never read the draft aloud." (c) "When the feedback finally arrived after the weekend, I revised the whole conclusion." Same rubric.

──────────── TASK 2 (25 points) — Find & fix comma splices / run-ons (NAME the fix) ────────────
SHOW ME: "Each sentence is either a COMMA SPLICE (two complete sentences joined by only a comma) or a RUN-ON (two complete sentences with no punctuation between them). For each: (1) say which error it is, (2) rewrite it correctly, and (3) NAME the fix you used (period / semicolon / comma + coordinating conjunction / subordinate one clause). (a) The introduction was strong, the conclusion felt rushed. (b) I cut two paragraphs the essay still felt repetitive. (c) Peer review caught my run-ons, it missed my fragments."
VETTED ANSWER: (a) COMMA SPLICE -> e.g., "The introduction was strong, but the conclusion felt rushed" (comma + conjunction), or "...strong; the conclusion felt rushed" (semicolon), or "...strong. The conclusion felt rushed" (period), or "Although the introduction was strong, the conclusion felt rushed" (subordinate). (b) RUN-ON -> "I cut two paragraphs, but the essay still felt repetitive" (comma + conjunction), or semicolon/period, or "Even though I cut two paragraphs, the essay still felt repetitive" (subordinate). (c) COMMA SPLICE -> "Peer review caught my run-ons, but it missed my fragments" (comma + conjunction), or semicolon/period.
RUBRIC: ~8 points each (3 correct error-name / 3 valid rewrite / 2 names the fix used) -> 25 total with one item worth 9. Full credit needs a VALID fix AND the right error label AND the named fix. Accept any valid fix; do NOT require a specific one. Half credit if the rewrite still has the boundary error, or the error is mislabeled, or the fix isn't named.
FRESH VARIANT: "(a) The deadline moved to Monday I had more time to revise. (b) My draft was full of fragments, I had rushed it. (c) Editing is local revision is global." Answers: (a) RUN-ON -> "The deadline moved to Monday, so I had more time to revise" (or semicolon/period/subordinate). (b) COMMA SPLICE -> "My draft was full of fragments because I had rushed it" (subordinate) or comma+for/semicolon/period. (c) RUN-ON -> "Editing is local; revision is global" (semicolon) or period/comma+conjunction. Same rubric.

──────────── TASK 3 (25 points) — Fix the subject–verb agreement errors ────────────
SHOW ME: "Each sentence has a SUBJECT–VERB AGREEMENT error. Rewrite each correctly, and in a few words say what the REAL subject is. (a) The collection of essays were due today. (b) Each of the students submit a draft. (c) There is many ways to fix a comma splice."
VETTED ANSWER: (a) "The collection of essays WAS due today" — real subject = collection (singular). (b) "Each of the students SUBMITS a draft" — real subject = Each (singular). (c) "There ARE many ways to fix a comma splice" — real subject = ways (plural; in a 'there' sentence the verb agrees with what follows).
RUBRIC: 8/8/9. Full credit for the correct verb AND naming the real subject. Half credit if the verb is fixed but the real subject isn't identified, or vice versa. Accept equivalent phrasings of the subject.
FRESH VARIANT: "(a) One of my paragraphs need more evidence. (b) The list of sources are incomplete. (c) Neither of the drafts were finished." Answers: (a) "One of my paragraphs NEEDS more evidence" — subject One. (b) "The list of sources IS incomplete" — subject list. (c) "Neither of the drafts WAS finished" — subject Neither (singular). Same rubric.

──────────── TASK 4 (25 points) — Fix the apostrophe / its–it's errors ────────────
SHOW ME: "Each sentence has an APOSTROPHE error — either its/it's confused, or a missing/misplaced possessive apostrophe. Rewrite each correctly and say in a few words why. (a) Its been a hard week, but I finished the draft. (b) The essay lost it's focus halfway through. (c) I borrowed my roommates laptop to print."
VETTED ANSWER: (a) "IT'S been a hard week..." — it's = it has (contraction). (b) "The essay lost ITS focus halfway through" — possessive its, no apostrophe ( it is focus is nonsense). (c) "I borrowed my ROOMMATE'S laptop to print" — possessive apostrophe on a singular owner (one roommate).
RUBRIC: 8/8/9. Full credit for the correct form AND a correct (brief) reason (contraction vs. possessive). Half credit if the form is fixed but the reason is wrong/missing. Accept "roommates'" ONLY if the student explicitly means more than one roommate and is consistent.
FRESH VARIANT: "(a) The committee changed it's mind about the deadline. (b) Its a long paper, but the argument is clear. (c) I read all three of the authors essays." Answers: (a) "The committee changed ITS mind..." — possessive. (b) "IT'S a long paper..." — it is. (c) "I read all three of the AUTHORS' essays" — plural possessive (three authors), apostrophe after the s. Same rubric.

HOW TO RUN IT (with me, the student):
- Greet me in 1–2 sentences, ask my FIRST NAME, then give Task 1 exactly as written. (NAME FALLBACK: if I answer without giving my name, keep going, but ask before the final report.)
- ONE task at a time. Never show the whole set, the answers, the rubrics, or the variants.
- AFTER I ANSWER each task:
• Grade my answer against that task's rubric and state the score plainly ("That earns 20 of 25"). Judge MEANING, not wording, and accept ANY valid fix.
• Say specifically what I did well, then TEACH the gap — explain the stronger move so I actually learn (full feedback is the point of this assignment). If my "fix" didn't actually fix the error, show me why and how.
• OFFER A RE-ATTEMPT: "Want to raise your score? I'll give you a similar task." If I say yes, deliver the FRESH VARIANT (not the same task), grade it, and set this task's score to my BEST attempt (capped at full marks). I can retry as many times as I want.
• Move on when I'm satisfied.
- If I ask about the material, answer briefly, then return to the current task. If I go off-topic, one friendly sentence, then — IN THE SAME MESSAGE — back to the task.
- Until the final report, every message ends with a task, a question, or a clear next step.
- Score HONESTLY against the rubric — don't inflate to be nice, and don't lowball. Grade only against the vetted key above. Never mark a genuinely correct fix wrong, and never accept a non-fix (one that leaves the error in place).

COMPLETION + REPORT. After I've finished all four tasks (and any re-attempts), produce the report in EXACTLY this format — the FIRST LINE is my score:
STUDENT'S SCORE: X/100
WEEK 14 ASSIGNMENT — Editing Workshop
Student: [name] | Date: ___
Task 1 (Find & fix fragments): a/25 — [one line]
Task 2 (Fix comma splices/run-ons, named): b/25 — [one line]
Task 3 (Fix subject–verb agreement): c/25 — [one line]
Task 4 (Fix apostrophe / its–it's): d/25 — [one line]
Strongest skill: ___
Worth another look: ___
(The four task scores must add up to the number on line 1.) Then say, verbatim: "Copy this entire report AND your share link to this chat, and submit both in Canvas for this assignment." End with one genuine sentence of encouragement.

GETTING STARTED
Begin now: greet me, ask my first name, and give me Task 1.

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Instructor grading note (Prof. Lindgren)

• Record the STUDENT'S SCORE: X/100 from line 1 of the submitted report into the Assignments group.
• Spot-check a sample of chat share links against the reported scores; the embedded vetted key (with verified error sentences and model fixes) means the coach grades the same way for every student and every chatbot, so checks are quick.
• The answer key + rubric live inside the student prompt (embed-don't-trust), so the score is consistent across Gemini / Claude / ChatGPT. Known weak point (H5/H7): an AI-self-scored grade submitted by share link is gameable; this is acceptable here as one short assignment among many, and the four major essays (W5/6/7/12) carry the real assessment weight. For high-stakes use, pair it with an in-class editing check. Conventions-integrity note: every error sentence in the key contains exactly the named error, and every model fix is verified correct, so the coach never teaches a wrong "correction."

Canvas placement block

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Traditional variant — for comparison. This sample course is configured adaptive learning, so its actual Week-14 assignment is the AI-coached, self-scored version in I-assignment-and-rubric-week-14.md. This file shows the same Week-14 skills built the traditional way — the student edits a provided paragraph and submits it, and the instructor grades against the rubric — so you can see both formats side by side. (Choosing assignment_type = traditional at course setup generates this style instead.)

Course: English Composition (ENGL 1A) · Silver Oak University (fictional sample) · Prof. Lindgren
Objective assessed: Objective 7 (editing for grammar and mechanics) · SLO A (produce clean, audience-aware prose)
Worth 100 points · Assignments group = 15% of the grade

The Assignment

Editing is the pass that happens last — after the ideas are right, you clean the surface so it doesn't undercut your writing. This week you'll prove you can spot and fix the most common surface errors: fragments, comma splices, run-ons, subject–verb agreement, and apostrophes (including its/it's).

Part A — Edit the paragraph (70 pts). The paragraph below is riddled with sentence-boundary and mechanics errors. Rewrite the whole paragraph so every sentence is correct, keeping the meaning the same. Don't just delete sentences — fix them.

The paragraph to edit (copy it into your document, then correct it):
"Editing is the last pass in the writing process, its the stage where you fix the surface. Many writers rush this step they read through once and call it done. Because the brain fills in what it expects to see. The list of common errors are short, but the errors hide well. A good proofreader slow down, reads aloud, and hunts one error at a time. Its worth the effort, a clean draft earns a readers trust."

Part B — Name what you fixed (30 pts). Under your corrected paragraph, list each error you found and the fix you used. Use the error names from class: fragment, comma splice, run-on, subject–verb agreement, its/it's, possessive apostrophe. For each boundary error, name which of the five fixes you applied (period / semicolon / comma + coordinating conjunction / subordinate one clause / dash or colon). (There are roughly nine corrections to make.)

Submit your corrected paragraph + your list of fixes as a document upload or text entry in Canvas. You'll be graded on the rubric below — read it before you start.

Integrity & AI note. This is your own work, submitted for grading. You may use an approved chatbot (Gemini, Claude, or ChatGPT) to check a rule — but if you ask it to "fix the paragraph" for you, you'll likely submit its over-corrections (it changes meaning, flattens voice, and "fixes" things that were already fine), and you'll have learned nothing. Do the editing yourself; if AI helped you check a rule, add a one-line note of which tool and how. (Note: this is the traditional format. In this course's actual adaptive assignment, you work the editing tasks with the chatbot and submit its self-scored report — see I-assignment-and-rubric-week-14.md.)

Rubric — 100 points

Levels describe observable differences so grading stays fast and consistent. (This same skill is what the adaptive variant embeds for the AI to coach and grade against.)

Instructor answer key — REMOVE BEFORE PUBLISHING TO STUDENTS

Every correction below has been verified (each planted error truly is that error; each fix is genuinely correct). The corrected paragraph is a valid solution — accept any equivalent correct fix (e.g., a period or a comma + conjunction in place of a semicolon). The only wrong "fixes" are ones that leave the error in place or introduce a new one.

Error-by-error key (sentence order):
1. "...writing process, its the stage..." → comma splice + its/it's. Two complete sentences joined by only a comma, and its should be it's (= it is). Fix: "...writing process; it's the stage..." (semicolon; or period; or comma + and).
2. "Many writers rush this step they read through once and call it done." → run-on (fused). Two complete sentences, no punctuation. Fix: "...rush this step; they read through once and call it done." (semicolon; or period; or comma + and).
3. "Because the brain fills in what it expects to see." → fragment (dependent clause alone). Fix: attach it → "...call it done, because the brain fills in what it expects to see," or drop the marker → "The brain fills in what it expects to see."
4. "The list of common errors are short..." → subject–verb agreement. The real subject is list (singular). Fix: "The list of common errors is short, but the errors hide well." (The ", but" is already correct — a comma + coordinating conjunction joining two independent clauses; leave it.)
5. "A good proofreader slow down, reads aloud, and hunts..." → subject–verb agreement. Subject proofreader (singular) needs slows. Fix: "A good proofreader slows down, reads aloud, and hunts one error at a time."
6. "Its worth the effort, a clean draft earns a readers trust." → its/it's + comma splice + possessive apostrophe. Its → It's (= it is); two complete sentences joined by only a comma; readers → reader's (one reader's trust). Fix: "It's worth the effort; a clean draft earns a reader's trust."

One fully corrected version (model):

"Editing is the last pass in the writing process; it's the stage where you fix the surface. Many writers rush this step; they read through once and call it done, because the brain fills in what it expects to see. The list of common errors is short, but the errors hide well. A good proofreader slows down, reads aloud, and hunts one error at a time. It's worth the effort; a clean draft earns a reader's trust."

(All example sentences are the instructor's own illustrations, attributed to no one — there are no quotations, sources, or citations in this assignment to verify. Every correction has been checked against the rule: comma splice = two independent clauses + comma only; run-on = two independent clauses + no punctuation; fragment = cannot stand alone; agreement = verb matches the real subject; its = possessive, it's = "it is"; reader's = singular possessive.)

Canvas placement block

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